AATM Ruby's Story pg 32

Woo page 32!

Its a pretty decent page, I really like the bottom panel, and wtf, Jets a virgin o.O?

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AATM Alita and Intolerance

Just a little random thing I drew whilst waiting for a class meeting, its an ittle for a tiny comic I've been pondring about for quite a while now and I really wanted to upload something so I drew this really quickly, which is why it doesnt look great, oh well I like it none the less ^_^

Finished Avril

Wewt, coloured. I quite like this, colours are simple but I think their pretty effective. Red and black are my two fave colours, and I know I know I use them for Ruby, but one more cant hurt, I hope.

I also really like the colours too the wings and horns and tail, just look kewl.

This may not be her final design, may change the hair as a good friend pointed out Alita and Duo have teh same hair as me, so I shouldnt really use it for Avril as well, so I think I'll keep the length but make teh hair more messy and kinda spikey ^_^

Rough Avril

This is a bit of a random character, Avril is a succubuss, but a nice one, I think lol. She offers to make people dreams come true for their soul, which she then stores in safe keeping so they get granted a good place in the afterlife, although she cant exactly tell them that.

I think shes gonna be living somewhere in the AATM universe, but whether or not your ever gonna see much of her in teh actual stories is yet to be decided.

Anyway, I really cant decide if I'm going to colour this or not, the butt looks hot but a lil odd to me, but maybe thats just me nit-picking, so lemme know what you think pleasex

AATM Ruby's Story Page 30

Not gonna say much, love the top panel, think the sword looks awsome

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AATM Ruby's Story Page 29

Ahhhhhhhhhhhh finally lol

The reason this page has tooken ages is because I'm a bit of a perfectionist, and I wanted the angles to really really work you know?

So one I finshed the Pen I began colouring it, and typicallly I fgured out a much nicer layout and much better angles and stuff, so I scrapped it and started a new >.<

Its weird, I dont like how this looks on paper. All my art is hand drawn, and I'm pretty damn proud of that, so I usually prefer how teh actual piece itself looks, rather then when its scanned on the pc screen, but i used a different type of paper then usual, and it doesnt look as good, but it looks ok now its on screen so meh lol.

I'm happy with this page, real happy, love the third panel, I think it works so so well, I love how fucked up Duo looks, and I think I did a good job with the shading and stooooof ^_^

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Raven Two Redone

See, told you I'd do it ^_^

As you know this isnt the first time I've drawn Raven in this posem hence the "Redone" part ^_^, yeah this is a remake of the second Raven I did and I really really liked it, it was my favourite one until I did Raven Six I was quite upset when the origonal was ridiculed on the net on a site or two, saying the ass was awsome but the face was fucked, but i learned that as an artist you have to face critisism, be it good or bad, so I got over it, but recently I was browsing through my art and as much as I hate to admit it I could see what they ment, and I though " Man, I could draw that SO much better now" and so, wu-lah!!

Ok so comparisons, well obviously the face, I was worried the head was gonna seem too big, so I shrunk it using the pc, but that looked weird so I left it the size it is lol. But yeah the face looks much better, I love how in the last one it was just like a "Meh" face, whereas here she's looking down at her booty like " Yeah its big, yeah its grey, but you all know you wanna hit this!" Like she looks SO proud of it ^_^.

Speaking of the booty Its much better this time, shinier, better coloured, although theres some. theres much less pencil crayon scratch marks, I've blended the grey much neater I think, and I also think the ass has much more bounce and roundness to it here, in the former it was hot but very flat, here it looks more like it would actually jiggle if you squeezed it XD. This is probally because although there's more white shiney bits there much smaller, which is much more realistic. The coat looks nice too, and I think removing the nipple on the bewb works better as well.

So yeah, enjoy lol x