Like I said in the last page, I've grown sick of the sunburnt pink I use, and wanted to improve, and I think I've seriously done that, if you disagree let me know, but I'm very happy with it.
I also like the additonal shines to the lips and eyes and the shadow in the eyes too, I thnk its very succsessful.
I'm starting to ingle reading his, the evolution is so fucking close!
I really liek jet, I like how she's tied to a pole and could die any second but she's still just smiling and swearing and being liek "FUCK YOU!" ^_^. Really like that botom panel, I liek teh second alot too actually lol .
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I just read page 37 too, so I'll comment on that as well.
I think Duo telling all that about taking the eyes and tongues out is a bit too much, he's monologing which is a camp thing a lot of people fall into with villains. Another thing is Jet's wording, it's too forced to make any dramatic effect.
But the drawing is great, you're improving with shading, but the side profile shots look a bit off, you might need to work on that a tiny bit though.
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