Ok, so you all know Ruby, and you all know Cyan, and if you dont you really should by now, so that means your not a fan................NO COOKIES FOR YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!
Anyway, as SOME of you will know, Ruby and Cyan have the hots for each other, and do all sorts of stuf with eachother, yep, even that, but again their not actually a couple yet ( they get together after the battle with Kane ).
Here their disscussing how they deal with the deaths they have to cause, and Cyan is pretty shocked to see Ruby's true cold nature.I think its pretty well drawn, the back grounds not great, and the last panel was pretty hurried, but I do like i, I really like the shading to the faces, usuall I just do a little down the side, but I tried to expand on that and just make it look all together better ^_^
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Hey It's Colby, Some good artwork lately. I like it. So its been a while since we last talked. you probably don't remember me. I kinda wanted to apologize for the last time we talked. Hope you can forgive me about it. well anyway, i guess I'll ttyl
I like the comic, and where the narrative might go, but I think you should word it differently, it feels forced, as if you're trying hard to get the words out and say what you mean, for example, instead of Ruby have all that exposition, she could have just said
"Better them than me." Or maybe something along the lines of "My job doesn't have room for emotions.".
And I think Cyan's third bubble after he says "ever get that?" is unnecessary, it's like you're trying to get the emotion out when you don't need it.
Sorry about the rambling! But in terms of the art work, it's really cool, the last panel is rushed, but I think if you did a proper comic, it'd work out.
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